WWW
- I think my cover uses a simplistic and minimalistic effect, but yet still draws in an audience. The bright block of colour advertises the band and draws the readers attention to it.
- Colours work.
EBI
- I need to consider an article instead of Q+A as i feel more confident doing this.
- My contents image needs to be moved around or resized. I should also consider another photo.
- I need to include page numbers.
Feedback- Mrs Abrahamson
WWW
- Cover uses good symmetry
- Colours work
- Model is well chosen and styled well.
EBI
- Article length is too short
- Page numbers- look at style models.
- Photos-playaround with different poses and sizes
- Round of article better e.g twitter feed
- Contents- look at using a different photo or resize
- DPS- loose the amount of exclamation marks use. Perhaps look at doing an article instead of Q+A as you said.
- What is the release date? Tour dates? Twitter feed etc.
LEVEL 3
Feedback- Mr Ford
WWW
- A decent house style( with the beginnings of a good idea)
EBI
- You need better images of your artist
- look at real mags for help. I'll give you some help too.
Top Level 1
Low Level 2
Feedback- Survey Monkey
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